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Friday, August 30, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday


Hello gentle men and gentle women.

God, it's been so long since I didn't post something for FFF. I hope you'll be indulgent with me, I'm not very good at it, lol.

So, for those of you who don't know what the Flash Friction Friday is: One pic, one hundred words. And here we go ....


 
 
 
 

I can feel you.
Ed grinned behind his arm. Markus was so weak, it was almost too easy. Two days on the streets, and Markus couldn't stand to be without him. Well, you won’t complain about having to provide for me anymore, now will you? Everything was going according to his plan.
He slowly moved, turning on the side and lowering his arm to look at his lover—his provider.
“Well, well. Look who’s here. Missing me already, Markus baby?”
Marcus’s eyes weren’t looking at him; they were focused on Sally.
“No, Ed. I came for my dog.”
 
Now, all you have to do is leave a comment if you feel like it, and follow the link on the Flash Fiction Friday Blog to see what my fellow flashers are up to.
 


8 comments:

  1. Oh that's wonderful! Ed thought he was in control and then the pow! A great final sentence. Great flash, so glad you have returned Jade.

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  2. Great Flash Jade I wasn't expecting it to end that way :)

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  3. Hey, Jade, so glad you joined us again. That was a great flash. Loved the last line :-)

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  4. Who said you weren't very good at it?! Good God, girl, you duped all four of us! I never expected the twist at the end! Wonderful surprise! Wonderful flash!!:) xo

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  5. Ooo, so cold! I loved it! What a way to show Ed how little control he really had. You're good! :D

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  6. That was straight-up funny. I liked the end. Wonderful post!

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